Responding To "Mosnters are due on Maple Street".

Well, last week I read a story called “Monsters are due on Maple Street”. It was a very interesting story, and like all the stories this one had a special message. I think that the message on this story is that the people on Maple Street, when they don’t have someone to blame they blame themselves, the worst enemy. “With few variations. They pick the most dangerous enemy they can find… and it’s themselves”. Said one of the aliens. I think that’s one important message that the author wants us to understand very well. The story helps me to understand that the guilt is not always what it seems. You can have it in your self or you can have it beside you or sometimes you can’t even see it.

I think that the messange is really valid on todays world. Righ now that message is all over the movies and kids books. Its a very tipic message, veryone takes it in a good way. I think that if I was going to remake the stoy I wouln't change nothing of the message because I think that the message is better seen righnow than before. For this message I feel very good because is a mesagge thatreally expreses what the aouthur whants to transmit.

Well, now I think that Monster are due on Maple Street need some changes so the people no can really beleave that story. Something that I would change is how the blackout happends, righ now if a blckout occurs no one wories. They just call the police or something like that, righ now it is very normal. An other thing I would change is the way Tommy sais about the aliens, it is a way thatr no one will beleve because its a little kid and they wach those things on tv. Other things I would change is were the setting will be, I think that it could be in the suburbs because is a little place were you can`t go out. Some equipments that could be affected in the blackout so it would be alittle more strange could be cellphones, i pods and clocks. Those will be some changes I will make to the teleplay.

Worst day..

I am going to tell you about a day that I had few weeks ago. It was in the month of October, I think I woke up with my left foot because I dirren`t find neather my mom or my maid because my brother was sleeping so I couln have break fast and I needed to wait untill lunch time because they were not there. Then at lunch they did the worst luch I hated that food it was the food that my brother liked.

Later when I was waching a Barcelona`s game, they told me that last Friday Puyol`s dad died so then the team was very sad about that and they were loosing most of their games. That was avery bad news for me and some other people. When it was going to de 4:00 that is the hour when my favorite tv show was coming up, the president started talking so I couln`t wach it neather wach tv because the president was talking in every channel.

When it was time to go out with my friends like at 8:30, we dirren`t now were to go. Then they called me that we were going to goto Mc. Donalds. When I got there anyone was there so I needed to wait like a half hour to the people to come. When they were there I found out that I forgot to ask my mom for money so I couln`t eat because anyone will share me mony. Everyone finished their food and we were board, we dirre`t had nothing to do. I asked my mom that if I could go walking to Club Cartagna and she let me, that was the only good thing that happend to me that day.

When we were on the way, some strage guy got near us and started talking strange the only thing I could do was run to the neares buillding, wich I did. Then of about 10 minnuts of walking we got there, and because the day before it rained all the road was filled with water and I axidently fell in it and everyine laugh at me! It was horrible! Finally my mom came for me and took me to my house then the ligh whent off nad I needed to sleep without air. In conclusion the halloween stories are true because that was a Friday 13 and it was a badluck day!

High School Party!

"So are we going to finally make this party for school?" Gilberta said.

"I think that yes" Maria answered.

"Well I don't care, I would do whatever is good for all of you" Kate said murrmuring.

Gilberta is very normal, "Ok, so know we should start planning the party with all of our ideas."She said.

"Oh, well whatever lets do my idea, it abouslly the cooler one!" Maria said shouting.

To finish Dniela said normally, "I think we should take ideas from all the people is not just your party."

So, it was their last day in High School, and they were meeting in Daniela's house to plan the party. First came kate and Gilberta, they were only 10 minuts late. Daniela was very angre becouse they dirren't had to much time to plan the party and they were 10 minuts late. Then half an hour pased and Maria wasen't there yet. Daniela was about to explote but kate and Gilberta tried to explane to her that Maria was late becouse she was in the doctor.

Daniela dirren't really whant to understand, she was very angre and she told Kate to start planing without Maria.

"No, let's wait untill Maria comes, she is the one with more creativity", Gilberta said.

"No! I have more creativity than she does! Lets start lets start now!!"Daniela said very loud.

Then of about 15 minuts, Maria came. Daniela started to anrgue to Maria and starts to shought at her. Maria getsa lottle scared, but starts fighting with Daniela. Kate and Gilberta started to separete them. Then when they are in normal, they started to plan the party. At fisrt they were agreen on many things. They wanted to by hats, cake, and coke. But then the conflict came, Daniela started to stuggel to all of them because she dirren't like those ideas. She wanted the party to be how she wanted it to be not like they were doing it. So she started arguing.

Daniela at firts starts to figh with Gilberta, she blames her of all of what was done. Gilberta becomes very angree about this and althoug she dosen't ilke to figh, she starts fighting with her becaouse Daniela really makes people angree. Then Gilberta talks to the other and they agree with her and became angree with Daniela too. They all bacame fighting now againts Daniela.

Daniela starts to feel very bad about this. She really likes things how she wants, but she dosen't like all of her "friends" to figh with her.

"Hey Daniela you don't need to cry about this, its really dum." Maria said.

"What can I do if you whant to make the party a really disaster?" Daniela anwerd.

"But it's not a desaster evryone is agreen exept you, what is your problem?" Gilberta said in the middle.

"Nothing" Daniela said angree.

"So then lets call everyone and tell them that this party is CANCElED!"Maria anaunced.

Then they all started talking about it. They decided to call and said it was canceled. But then Kate said the she wanted to do the party.

"Just because Daniela ir arguing we are not going to have fun and make a party?" she said.

"Well thats true", Gilberta said.

"So do we make the party or no?" Maria asked.

"I think to make it." Daniela said.

Later, they all became staring at her , becouse she was the one that dirren't wanted to do the party. Then whe they were calmed and where not fighting anymore, they became talking civiliced about to make the party or not.

"So the ebst we can do is to vote about thins things"Kate proposed.

"Ok so who votes to do the party?" Gilberta asked.

"Me, me and me", Kate,Daniela and Maria. "Well and me too" Gilberta said.

They all whanted to do the party but now the problem was how would they make it. Then the climax came, they were almost deciding about the conflict. Danielas mom came into the room. They asked her if she could help them. Then she said,

"No, I can't it's your party!"

I think you should take ideas from every student in you class, then you cold make a paty that everyone liked. Later, the calm came, they asked for ideas ans the had the the party made. When Friday came they were very happy it was one of the most fun and cool parties they had ever been too. Now that it had a little bit from each person.

Trip to Cholon..

Well now I am going to tell you what I did in the last Novembrinas. At first my mom was going to stay at house and do not go to such place. But then she talked with a friend that lived near our house. She had invited us to Cholon, thats a big island were people have different houses and can go there to have a good time. You can go to Cholon by car or by boat. We whent to an island called Maui, it was very big and beautiful.

My mom told me to invite one of my friends, I called most of them but they all had plans exept Valentina so I invited her. She asked her mom and she let her. Then on Saturday morning we whent in boat at 8:00am. When we got there it was very boaring because we dirren't know what to do. We were new in that place so we were a little shy.

Then the friend of my mom, told us to go into the big donut. Thats a juge floating life best that its controlled by the boat. Every time that thing started going we felt becaouse we dirren't know how was it really. Then of few haurs we were experts. It was really easy but at first you think it would be very difficult.

On that trip we did plenty of things. We ate untill we couln't eat a peace of nut. It was so fun that we whanted to stay there like one week more. In tha island beside it Susana was there and she invited us to her house too. That day we sleep there and there was a juge storm and we were telling scary stories.

In conlusion those days were one of the most fun days that I've ever had! Every time I am going to go Valentina tells me that she whants to go with me. I also wanted to make my birthday there too, becaouse its a very fun place to be with me and all of my friends. Also Susy can invite half of them to hers and me the other half, that way it would be alot more fun!

Terrible Holiday..

Few weeks ago I had a terrible experience. It was the day before Christmas. I was in the house of my friend Carolina and there was estrange man that was always looking at me. He was (1) old, gross, and mysterous. I really dirren't like that guy too much. Then few days later an other man arrived to the house. But I don't know if (2) by car, by taxi, or by foot. The only thing I knew was that the man was very strange and whanted to do something to me.

The day before Christmas came and Carolina and me were very happy and exited becouse we were going to have alot of gifts from our families. I called my mom and she told me she was going to send me (3) a book, a bag of pens, and a very preatty laptop.(4) The man, however, was very strage. Then the man came nad told me (5) no, your mom dirren't send anything.(6) before I was very angree, the man started to laugh and whent up stairs.
(7)Then having finished his lough, he took the laptop and threw it down the stairs.It was the worst day ever! my mom told me to forget it, but I couln't it was horrible.



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(5) Introductory yes, no or interdaction.
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(7)Introductory of participal phrases.
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A Great Movie!!

The last week Isabel, one of my friends asked me to go to her house to wach a movie. At first I reallty dirren't want to go becouse all the good movies at blockbuster we have seen them all. Then she called me and told me to go to Video Wolrd and seen what movies we can watch. I whent and saw a movie called "Just my Luck", at first it really looked very boring but she told me to get that movie, so I got it.

When I got to Isabel's house, I saw that there were Lisette and Isabella. I was very glad they were there becouse I dirrent whant to watch the movie alone with Isa. When the movie started, it was very boring and I was almost sleeping. Then Isa Morales gave us popcorn with coke. Then the movie started to get better and better.

It was in the part were the luck of the girl was exchanging with the luck of the man. Anybody new what was going to happend, so I had my eyes very open so we could see what will happed.
Then the movie start to be a little funny, we laugh and laugh. Then the "Climax" or the interesting story of the movie came.

We were in a very suspensful part of the movie, Isa gave us chocolate and we dirrent whant to eat it becouse then we would not pay attention to the movie.Then evrything was very calmed and we were out of the suspence. I really loved the movie, and I really whant to see it again but with all of my friends. Hope taht could happend, becouse it's really a very cool, funny and interesting movie.

My Brother Pipe...

I think everyone has problems, I am one of them I am always fighting with my brother. Well I have a brother that is 15 years old, and I am 12. We usually have many problems with each other. In my life when I have a problem and I see that I can do something to make it better I try to do my best to make the problem disappear. But with my brother it has been very difficult to fix the mistakes I have done with my brother but I really haven't figure out what can I do.

Well my brother's name is Andres Felipe, but I rather called him Pipe. Sometimes I reallt don't know how to deal with mmy problems. Lets say that I am in mu room, and then Pipe comes and gets into my room and gets my cellphone without permition. That really makes me really angree. Sometimes when I am in those situations I don't know what to do so I go to my mom and make her to put a punish to Pipe.

Also when I am very angree dealing with my problmes I have some strages reactions. I strart telling bad words to my brother and throing all the things to the floor. Thats why sometimes my brother is the one that couses the problem but by acting that way I get punished too. Those are the things that I most hate, that someone starts the problem and I get punished too.

when I have to deal with a problem and I need to fine a solution very fast I really don't know what to do. I am really very bad to solve things fats, I would rtaher take my time to solve those problems. But the thing is, that when I have figured out how to solve the problem my brother dosent whant to talk to me anymore! So i really don't now what to do.

Well I think that I really have problems with my brother, and I really think that we can figure aout what we can do to make it work. Last year he whent to the United States to live, and when he came back he was really more comprensive with me. I hope he keeps like that and we can be good friends when we grow up. I rally need to say that I am pretty glad to have a brother like him.

My First Awesome Expirience..

Well, the last year I whent to the soccer and basketball practices at school. At first I though that I was very bad at them and I will not be able to be on the team. I was right it was real I vas very bad at both of the sports. When they choosed the team for Cartagena Games, I was in group B that means the bad ones. I really was very disapointed becouse I really whanted to be in both of the teams. I liked soccer alot more that basket, I really enter basket just to go to Binationals, or other trips. But at the end I finished entering group B in both of the sports.

When we had like 2 months of practising every week, I started to like basket. Now I really love to play both them by equal. Then when we had like half year playng I reallise that I have been doing better in those sports. When they were choosing the teams to go to Albania Games, I was choosen in the basket team but not in the soccer one. Althoug I though that I was better in soccer. So I whent to Albania Games by basket only.

When it was almost time for the Binationals Games, I did the best I can so they could choose me in both teams. I really tried my best. Finally I was choosen in both teams and I was very very happy and very exited. The Binationals were going to be in Medellin that was alot more exiting. Afortunatly my mom let me be in both teams.

Going to Binationals vas really very fun. I had the oportunities to meet new friends, now I chat with them bye msn. I'am very glad I was one of little amount of people that whent to Binationals. Righ now I love to play both games. I learned a very good thing with these experience, and I whant that all the people reading this can understandit well. I learned that you can never give up, look at the begining of last year I was in group B, I whent to practice every day and look at me righ now. I am in both teams and hopefully going to every activity of these sports.

A Way of Learning..

Mr. Hide, our English teacher told us at the beggining of the year that we were going to make a blog. At first I though it was going to be very interesting, but a little difficult at the same time. It really was true righ now I love to post things in my blog. Although they are somethimes very difficult to me becouse I missed some classes and I don't Know how to do somethings yet. Right now I think that having a blog is very interesting and a very easy way of learning.

When I just strarted maiking the posts, I really feelt very scared becouse I dirren't now what was going to happend. Also becouse I dirren't now really how to make one and if people will going to like it or not. For the technical parts I am not really expert with them righ now, but I am shure that in really short time I am really going to now how to use all of those parts.

The most exiting part that has really surprised me are the comments. For one post I had 7 comments although Mr. Hide gave me a low grade in that posts. I really don't know why that happend, beocuse I really think ist a very good post and people actually liked to read it. If they dirren't like it they wouldn't have done those comments.

From this blog, I have really learn many things that I dirren' t knew before. Before this I dirren'y have a blog, actually I had a space righ now I don't becouse I canceled it. But a really think that having a blog is much better that having an msn space. The blogging is a very fun way of learning becouse you can learn to make reflections, responses, and how to make comments in other blog.

In conclusion, I really like to have this post. I have learned many things and I hope I still keep learning these many things. I thank Mr. Hide becouse he has helped me vey much to understand very well how to make a blog. Hope he keeps helping me.

Poor, Messi..

I feel very sorry, becouse of what happend to messi,(Lionel Messi, FCBarcelona).There did not appear to be any reason for further concern about Lionel Messi's condition. The Argentinian took a knock in the game against Racing Santander on Sunday and has been doing specific physiotherapy and gym work since then, missing the outing to Manresa.

He has been atending to the doctor. Santi Ezquerro injured the quadriceps in his left leg last Tuesday in training, and the Club Medical Services have announced that there is a contraction.But he will only need to do special training for about four days before retuning to the group.

Leo Messi has missed recent trainings session with thigh problems, but was back training as per normal on Thursday. Ezquerro, however, is still working out in isolation. But in my personal concept, he should be carefull becouse missing a player like messi is very bad.

An Exciting Story..

Well I really think that the story of "Three Skeleton Key", was very exciting. I personally really liked it. Sometimes in English we read stories that do not motivate people to much. But this story, most of the people liked it. I need to be honest there was one story called "Rikki-Tikki Tavi", that story was REALLY boring! I though all of the stories we were going to read, where going to be very boring. But, when I knew that the story was of suspence I read it vey carefully becouse I love the suspence stories, although sometimes they are very scary. At first the story was very confuising, and I really whant to know. Why does the story starts like that?, well thats one of the htings that I whant to ask the author,(George G. Toudouze).

When I was reading it remmained me to a very terrible expirience that happend to me and my brother. It all satrted when it was 9:00pm, it was a school day so I needed to sleep erlier. I was almost asleep when the door opened. "Hey! Close the door!" I shouted, becouse I knew It was my brother. Then my brother came in, and said: "Woah! Be carefull theres a cockroach running to your room!". I was totally scared becouse I hate cockroaches, I think they are discusting! Then that terrible thing came into my room and my brother was in ther with me too, I told him to kill that thing before I start screaming and wake up every other people. Then he took my tennis shoe and threw it to the cockroach, It dirrent die but It was upside down, so he could not move. But then he did something stupid, he took a shoe lase and strated punching the coackroach, then the coackroach standed unp and whent running away to the bathroom.

Finally, we where safe and the coackroach disapeared. That was a very grose expirience for me.
And this is what I think about the "Three Skeleton Key" story. In conclusion It was very exiting and sudpenfully story, I really liked it.

Trip to Glatingburg..

On vacations of 02\03, my parents dire´t know what to do. They were tiered and board, of always going to Disney World, for new year. They heard that someone was talking abaout a place in tennesee. So they decided to go there. The place was named Glatingburg. It is very pretty, it´s over in the top a the Smoky Mountains.


When we got there we were all new in that place! It was not so big ban it vas beautifull. There were candy factories everywere there were candys that I have never seen before. There was also a place for ice skating and there was snow everywere so we could go skiing too. It was avery awsome expirience.

In new year eve we were very happy. It was very cold there we needed to have like 10 peaces of cloth on. When it was 2003 we wehre all very happy. Then like 2 days before we whent back to Miami, Florida and staied there alot more time. It was a very fun expirience althoug it was a log time from now I remember ti very well and I hope I have a trip like that again.

Remembering Mr. Steve Irwin, The Crocodile Hunter

A terible lost..

Sometimes when I go swimming, I never thought they could be so dangerous animals there.
Such as what happend to Mr. Irwin. He was making an underwater film off Australia's Great Rief. While he was swimming a stingray attacked him, he was attacked very very near the heart. Doctors rushed to try and save the Australian but he died before he could be taken to the hospital. Mr. Irwin was married with two children aged eight and three.

Irwin spent his life facing danger in the wild. “Crikey!” Irwin would shoutwhile wrestling crocodiles or handling poisonous snakes and spiders. Hisbrave dventures were designed to teach the world to respect wildlife.Irwin also fought against the hunting of wildlife and worked with animals in their own habitats.

I thinck it was a terrible lost for everyone. He had a great program in Animal Planet. He helped us to understand animals life. To know that animals have feelings and they are very sentimental.If you whant to know a little more about this terrible lost you could go to CBBC News

How dose technology affect our education?

I think technology has a very good part in our education. One advantage is that we have more sources to find information,pictures and many things for the subject we are reaserching of. In the past years we only has books, encyclopedias and dictionaries,but now we also have computers, cell phones, and more. Other advantage are calculators. Calculators are good or bad depending on the way people make use of it, the cellphones also contain calculators. Also when you are writting something is really easy with the key board, you can do things very fast, but people can become a litle lazy too. Even though technology has advantages, it also has disadvantages. Some disadvantages are the tipe of advertisments the people put in public web pages,and is not that easy for some people to afford for it.