High School Party!

"So are we going to finally make this party for school?" Gilberta said.

"I think that yes" Maria answered.

"Well I don't care, I would do whatever is good for all of you" Kate said murrmuring.

Gilberta is very normal, "Ok, so know we should start planning the party with all of our ideas."She said.

"Oh, well whatever lets do my idea, it abouslly the cooler one!" Maria said shouting.

To finish Dniela said normally, "I think we should take ideas from all the people is not just your party."

So, it was their last day in High School, and they were meeting in Daniela's house to plan the party. First came kate and Gilberta, they were only 10 minuts late. Daniela was very angre becouse they dirren't had to much time to plan the party and they were 10 minuts late. Then half an hour pased and Maria wasen't there yet. Daniela was about to explote but kate and Gilberta tried to explane to her that Maria was late becouse she was in the doctor.

Daniela dirren't really whant to understand, she was very angre and she told Kate to start planing without Maria.

"No, let's wait untill Maria comes, she is the one with more creativity", Gilberta said.

"No! I have more creativity than she does! Lets start lets start now!!"Daniela said very loud.

Then of about 15 minuts, Maria came. Daniela started to anrgue to Maria and starts to shought at her. Maria getsa lottle scared, but starts fighting with Daniela. Kate and Gilberta started to separete them. Then when they are in normal, they started to plan the party. At fisrt they were agreen on many things. They wanted to by hats, cake, and coke. But then the conflict came, Daniela started to stuggel to all of them because she dirren't like those ideas. She wanted the party to be how she wanted it to be not like they were doing it. So she started arguing.

Daniela at firts starts to figh with Gilberta, she blames her of all of what was done. Gilberta becomes very angree about this and althoug she dosen't ilke to figh, she starts fighting with her becaouse Daniela really makes people angree. Then Gilberta talks to the other and they agree with her and became angree with Daniela too. They all bacame fighting now againts Daniela.

Daniela starts to feel very bad about this. She really likes things how she wants, but she dosen't like all of her "friends" to figh with her.

"Hey Daniela you don't need to cry about this, its really dum." Maria said.

"What can I do if you whant to make the party a really disaster?" Daniela anwerd.

"But it's not a desaster evryone is agreen exept you, what is your problem?" Gilberta said in the middle.

"Nothing" Daniela said angree.

"So then lets call everyone and tell them that this party is CANCElED!"Maria anaunced.

Then they all started talking about it. They decided to call and said it was canceled. But then Kate said the she wanted to do the party.

"Just because Daniela ir arguing we are not going to have fun and make a party?" she said.

"Well thats true", Gilberta said.

"So do we make the party or no?" Maria asked.

"I think to make it." Daniela said.

Later, they all became staring at her , becouse she was the one that dirren't wanted to do the party. Then whe they were calmed and where not fighting anymore, they became talking civiliced about to make the party or not.

"So the ebst we can do is to vote about thins things"Kate proposed.

"Ok so who votes to do the party?" Gilberta asked.

"Me, me and me", Kate,Daniela and Maria. "Well and me too" Gilberta said.

They all whanted to do the party but now the problem was how would they make it. Then the climax came, they were almost deciding about the conflict. Danielas mom came into the room. They asked her if she could help them. Then she said,

"No, I can't it's your party!"

I think you should take ideas from every student in you class, then you cold make a paty that everyone liked. Later, the calm came, they asked for ideas ans the had the the party made. When Friday came they were very happy it was one of the most fun and cool parties they had ever been too. Now that it had a little bit from each person.

Trip to Cholon..

Well now I am going to tell you what I did in the last Novembrinas. At first my mom was going to stay at house and do not go to such place. But then she talked with a friend that lived near our house. She had invited us to Cholon, thats a big island were people have different houses and can go there to have a good time. You can go to Cholon by car or by boat. We whent to an island called Maui, it was very big and beautiful.

My mom told me to invite one of my friends, I called most of them but they all had plans exept Valentina so I invited her. She asked her mom and she let her. Then on Saturday morning we whent in boat at 8:00am. When we got there it was very boaring because we dirren't know what to do. We were new in that place so we were a little shy.

Then the friend of my mom, told us to go into the big donut. Thats a juge floating life best that its controlled by the boat. Every time that thing started going we felt becaouse we dirren't know how was it really. Then of few haurs we were experts. It was really easy but at first you think it would be very difficult.

On that trip we did plenty of things. We ate untill we couln't eat a peace of nut. It was so fun that we whanted to stay there like one week more. In tha island beside it Susana was there and she invited us to her house too. That day we sleep there and there was a juge storm and we were telling scary stories.

In conlusion those days were one of the most fun days that I've ever had! Every time I am going to go Valentina tells me that she whants to go with me. I also wanted to make my birthday there too, becaouse its a very fun place to be with me and all of my friends. Also Susy can invite half of them to hers and me the other half, that way it would be alot more fun!

Terrible Holiday..

Few weeks ago I had a terrible experience. It was the day before Christmas. I was in the house of my friend Carolina and there was estrange man that was always looking at me. He was (1) old, gross, and mysterous. I really dirren't like that guy too much. Then few days later an other man arrived to the house. But I don't know if (2) by car, by taxi, or by foot. The only thing I knew was that the man was very strange and whanted to do something to me.

The day before Christmas came and Carolina and me were very happy and exited becouse we were going to have alot of gifts from our families. I called my mom and she told me she was going to send me (3) a book, a bag of pens, and a very preatty laptop.(4) The man, however, was very strage. Then the man came nad told me (5) no, your mom dirren't send anything.(6) before I was very angree, the man started to laugh and whent up stairs.
(7)Then having finished his lough, he took the laptop and threw it down the stairs.It was the worst day ever! my mom told me to forget it, but I couln't it was horrible.



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A Great Movie!!

The last week Isabel, one of my friends asked me to go to her house to wach a movie. At first I reallty dirren't want to go becouse all the good movies at blockbuster we have seen them all. Then she called me and told me to go to Video Wolrd and seen what movies we can watch. I whent and saw a movie called "Just my Luck", at first it really looked very boring but she told me to get that movie, so I got it.

When I got to Isabel's house, I saw that there were Lisette and Isabella. I was very glad they were there becouse I dirrent whant to watch the movie alone with Isa. When the movie started, it was very boring and I was almost sleeping. Then Isa Morales gave us popcorn with coke. Then the movie started to get better and better.

It was in the part were the luck of the girl was exchanging with the luck of the man. Anybody new what was going to happend, so I had my eyes very open so we could see what will happed.
Then the movie start to be a little funny, we laugh and laugh. Then the "Climax" or the interesting story of the movie came.

We were in a very suspensful part of the movie, Isa gave us chocolate and we dirrent whant to eat it becouse then we would not pay attention to the movie.Then evrything was very calmed and we were out of the suspence. I really loved the movie, and I really whant to see it again but with all of my friends. Hope taht could happend, becouse it's really a very cool, funny and interesting movie.

My Brother Pipe...

I think everyone has problems, I am one of them I am always fighting with my brother. Well I have a brother that is 15 years old, and I am 12. We usually have many problems with each other. In my life when I have a problem and I see that I can do something to make it better I try to do my best to make the problem disappear. But with my brother it has been very difficult to fix the mistakes I have done with my brother but I really haven't figure out what can I do.

Well my brother's name is Andres Felipe, but I rather called him Pipe. Sometimes I reallt don't know how to deal with mmy problems. Lets say that I am in mu room, and then Pipe comes and gets into my room and gets my cellphone without permition. That really makes me really angree. Sometimes when I am in those situations I don't know what to do so I go to my mom and make her to put a punish to Pipe.

Also when I am very angree dealing with my problmes I have some strages reactions. I strart telling bad words to my brother and throing all the things to the floor. Thats why sometimes my brother is the one that couses the problem but by acting that way I get punished too. Those are the things that I most hate, that someone starts the problem and I get punished too.

when I have to deal with a problem and I need to fine a solution very fast I really don't know what to do. I am really very bad to solve things fats, I would rtaher take my time to solve those problems. But the thing is, that when I have figured out how to solve the problem my brother dosent whant to talk to me anymore! So i really don't now what to do.

Well I think that I really have problems with my brother, and I really think that we can figure aout what we can do to make it work. Last year he whent to the United States to live, and when he came back he was really more comprensive with me. I hope he keeps like that and we can be good friends when we grow up. I rally need to say that I am pretty glad to have a brother like him.